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Fran Mason's avatar

Thanks for elucidating this. I've noticed this type of narration without having tried to describe it. I don't like that type of narrator in 20th century fiction. It feels, to me, like the author is being too intrusive. In this case, particularly with the narrator inside the bathroom stall with the female character, commenting on how she is pretty while she's vulnerable and having a hard time, this feels objectifying, and not like a loving presence. (On the other hand, an older example of this slightly intrusive narrator that comes to mind is in Madame Bovary, and that one doesn't bother me.)

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Jared Langford's avatar

The paired story “Zoey,” as I remember it, has a somewhat different narrator relationship. More centered in Zoey and his perception of Franny.

But maybe I need a re-read with this perspective in mind to see if I’m right. Maybe it’s the same adoring, pitying narrator from before

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