Oh I’m so pleased to hear that! I saw the whole thing quite differently once I found that Milton reference (can’t remember who pointed it out to me...) Hayden runs so deep, so quietly.
What a fine reading of this sonnet. I've always admired it and often thought of "darkness visible," but don't believe I've ever seen that noted before. I'd never seen the original version either. What a sad thing it is beside the final version. The original really does not sound like Hayden at all to me. Thank you for an enlightening experience.
Wonderfully done Henry. Thank you for piecing out the Milton influences so well -- I learn from you!
Oh I’m so pleased to hear that! I saw the whole thing quite differently once I found that Milton reference (can’t remember who pointed it out to me...) Hayden runs so deep, so quietly.
What a fine reading of this sonnet. I've always admired it and often thought of "darkness visible," but don't believe I've ever seen that noted before. I'd never seen the original version either. What a sad thing it is beside the final version. The original really does not sound like Hayden at all to me. Thank you for an enlightening experience.
I feel the same about the original--he made good edits!
Such an insightful and interesting talk-- thank you so much.
Glad you liked it!